Are my poems good for a ten year old?

No....I dont like it...(dont put that thumbs down on me!)

I LOVED IT!!!!!! IM TEN TOO!!! Can we be friends?lol?

Piece out!

2007-02-21 13:45:43 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋

I gazed into your eyes,
such a beutiful blue.
the waves stop crashing
the sun stopped melting
the sand was in our toes and
it was just me and you
And then i realized
the sand at our feet;
Time had stopped passing,
My search was complete;
I finally discovered,
What I'd known all along;
A mystery uncovered,
That just couldn't be wrong;
I had found my true love my
soul mate i had found it you!
only one work could describe us
LOVE i loved you you loved me if the world could stop
forever i would be in heaven forever never ending
nothing to worry about just how much i should love you today
because this is....... Ours

^ That is a really good poem for a 10 year old! its very describtive and shows a lot of emotion. it is a beautiful poem and realates to many people and is very deep. it gets through to people. it is a very good poem.

2007-02-21 21:42:32 · answer #2 · answered by emily 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Wow...interesting poem. Really gud. I write poems 2.

Here is one-

I remember his eyes,
That I cannot forget.
But when he left us all,
I can only regret.
He smiled like the sun,
Talked with pride.
Together he and my grandma walked side by side.
He grinned when he saw me,
He helped me when I was in despair.
But when I needed him again,
He wasn’t there.
There was no laughter,
There was no fun.
There was nothing to do
After what had been done.
If I could make a wish or two…
You know what I would do?
I would wish that he never died
And he was standing by us with much pride.
But if my wish had come true,
There wouldn’t be any happier people than me and you.
The sun would come out,
The rain would stop.
There would be no tear
For us to drop.

*Hope ya like it*

2007-02-22 00:37:50 · answer #3 · answered by тн¡иК™ツ- proud ¡иd¡αи 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋

yeah it is really good, but it isn't good for a ten year old to READ because it is all about love and there isn't love at that age; it will make 10 year olds think it is cool to have boyfriends. but yes it is great! keep it up!

2007-02-21 21:41:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

WOW! I'm 19 and I wouldn't be able to write a poem that good now. Great job!

2007-02-21 21:40:27 · answer #5 · answered by Green-Eyed Gal 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋

I really liked it ,it kept me interested
And if someone says you shouldn't be writing love poems because of your age don't listen to them keep it up because it's your talent and you can make something of yourself by doing it

2007-02-21 21:40:36 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋

if you were 10 yes, but i think you are older because most 10 year olds could careless about love and finding their soul mate.

2007-02-21 21:40:41 · answer #7 · answered by ? 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋

Hey beautiful, I give it an A+

2007-02-21 21:47:18 · answer #8 · answered by ♥NEVAR♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

the poem is really good! and yes ur beautiful!

2007-02-21 21:40:35 · answer #9 · answered by Chocogal 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

aw. for 10 years old..yes its good.

2007-02-21 21:42:00 · answer #10 · answered by Ashleyxo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Are my poems good for a ten year old?

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