i cry because you scream
i dream because i think about you
i listen because you talk
i kiss because you love
i hope because your still here
i pray because i need you
i learn because it makes you pround
i do all of these things for you.....
love..
hope...
pray....
cry....
kiss....
hug.....
make up.....
yell.....
dream.....
walk away.....
dont come back....
....its a love life....
tell me what ya think??!!??!
2007-02-21 13:15:49 · 16 answers · asked by â?¥ ~soccer luver~ â?¥ aka Zoe 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i think its really good. did u write it?
2007-02-21 13:20:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like I'd send it to my sick grandmother who used to beat me.
My gram's never beat me for fact but that's just the twist and turns it gives me. The ending the list of stuff, i don't know I feel it has been done already... like that RIGHT NOW song I forget who it's by but they just have random sayings coming up on the screen as they scream RIGHT NOW.
2007-02-21 21:21:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's sweet..in a wierd way. I liked it.
Based on personal experience I assume?
2007-02-21 21:19:34 · answer #3 · answered by n.t. 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thats really good! its totally about right about love too! Good Job!
2007-02-21 21:19:32 · answer #4 · answered by Lindsey R 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it very much.
2007-02-21 21:18:16 · answer #5 · answered by Tammers 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I liked it!
2007-02-21 21:23:18 · answer #6 · answered by ♥doodlebug♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love it it's absolutely a great poem. man do you have talent
2007-02-21 21:19:37 · answer #7 · answered by misbehaveing 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its sweet
2007-02-21 21:17:49 · answer #8 · answered by Justin 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It's good.
2007-02-21 21:20:50 · answer #9 · answered by Just me near dc 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Robert Frost is rolling in his grave.
2007-02-21 21:18:31 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋