I wish I didn't have to sleep
I'd have twice the time to think of you
Twice the hours to waste away
Wishing it was Saturday
When we were out of school
And I could take you on the town
and smile until the sun went down
Then park the car and watch the sky,
and compare it to your eyes
Then we'd kiss, and youd plead
"never leave, never leave"
Oh how strange of you to find
Whats farthest from my mind
Have I told you Id stop the world for you?
Because I would
I would.
2007-02-21 12:10:02 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
OMG! That was so beautiful! Whoever you wrote that about is pretty lucky to have a talented guy like u on her side. Those lyrics just made my heart stop. Oh how sweet! You just bought tears to my eyes. WOW! thatz amazing keep doin wut u do boi!!!!!
2007-02-21 12:18:24 · answer #1 · answered by ♥PiNk RoCkS♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hope to hear it in the radio sometime soon, keep up the good work its very well reade, its the type of song that will touch millions of people and will played in many weddings. Good luck
2007-02-21 20:23:25 · answer #2 · answered by none 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They're awesome, the only thing i'd suggest is getting rid of the reference to school. You wouldnt be able to tell your approx age if school was removed.
2007-02-21 20:26:52 · answer #3 · answered by Embrisa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
They are Pretty good Keep on writing
2007-02-21 20:13:23 · answer #4 · answered by Evil Angel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its nice
2007-02-21 20:12:07 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Milkshake♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very thoughtful lyrics, I enjoyed it :)
2007-02-21 20:14:08 · answer #6 · answered by Dalisa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There pretty good. are they copyrighted so I can steal them lol
2007-02-21 20:13:41 · answer #7 · answered by flonkas 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really pretty.
2007-02-21 20:16:04 · answer #8 · answered by Merry 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
aww thats really cutee.
2007-02-21 20:14:34 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's cute. nice job
2007-02-21 20:15:48 · answer #10 · answered by somegirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋