Your beauty shines just like a star so bright
On a mountain beneath a bright warm sky
Or the moon glowing in the lightless night
I sit by the tree as the night goes by
Someone near yet so far in my dreams abides
The one I now dream of and yearn so much
I wait and put my emotions aside
The day when we meet at last do I touch
There are many ways I can say love you
The only way to show you is with love
And you can say our love is highly new
As I wait and look at the stars above
My hearts deep desire at last have I found
My longing fulfilled’my love has no bound
2007-02-21 12:09:56 · 3 answers · asked by ???????????????? 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Teaching
your second line is a little bummpy....it's the little words that is throwing it off. But I LOVE the idea!
I'm doing sonnets in English class right now and I Love them!
2007-02-21 12:15:09 · answer #1 · answered by Vanessa H 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its really good. I did sonnets in my poetry section last year, and I hated them. Your theme is so good.
2007-02-21 20:43:44 · answer #2 · answered by Kimi 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, and great idea!
2007-02-21 20:18:17 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋