Should I add this poem to like an online voting website:
Raise your hands & touch the sky
Go to your “dream land”& begin to fly
Life’s a dream, Then you wake up
Hopefully you’ll have some sort of luck
Along this dream, many encounters you shall face
Just go along at your very own pace
Maybe you’ll travel down a road with no end
Every corner, there lies another bend
Maybe you’ll be stuck somewhere in between
And everyone you loved starts to be mean
You’re stuck in a world you thought you once knew
And now everybody has turned their backs on you
Maybe you’ll be the one at night who cries
Trying to make this end, hoping that everybody dies
But then your soul starts to scream
Just wishing you would wake up from this horrible dream
But now your telling yourself just to breath
And raise your hands & touch the sky
Go to your “dream land” & begin to fly
Life a dream, Then you wake up
Hopefully soon you’ll have your luck
2007-02-21 09:54:07 · 4 answers · asked by proven_punky 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
if you are wondering if you should add this poem to an online voiting website, you are probably curious to know how it will do. So I say go for it..it doesn't hurt to try...just maybe your pride if people do not like it. Most poems have a meaning to the writer...so whatever people say, don't let it get you down. I liked what you wrote...go for it and try.
Just as you say, "...raise your hands & touch the sky
Go to your “dream land” & begin to fly..." Go for it and keep on writing.
2007-02-21 10:01:47 · answer #1 · answered by youngm1335 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is beautiful, but I would put a little more feeling into it, but it is a great poem.
2007-02-21 18:14:08 · answer #2 · answered by julie c~actress and WWE&TNA_FAN! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good. I like it very much. I think you should put it on the site you mentioned.
2007-02-21 17:58:39 · answer #3 · answered by sokokl 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Simply "NO"
Add what is below instead:
2007-02-21 18:02:13 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋