Do you like my poem?

Question

Did you forget?


Who listened all those times, when you were feeling low?
Who sat beside you in rough times and helped you where to go?
Who cried when you cried, and helped away the tears?
Who tried to stay next to you, and help you with your fears?
Did you forget that I gave you my heart?
After you left, my whole world came apart.
Did you forget, all those nights we had?
And all those times you said you loved me, now it makes me sad.
Did you forget, when you called I was there?
I always helped, when you were in despair.
Well I remember all those times I made sure you were ok.
Cause if I get to see you smile once, it will be a better day.
You are now gone, but the memories still last.
It is hard to put the ones away with love, that’s in the past.
But you can still call, I will still be there.
It will still be like before, I will always care.
And remember it wise, or you will regret.
Because I will always be there for you, or did you forget?

whats your opinion

Answer 1

Ohhhh..., my God, it was very creative and full of feelings.... You should carry on writing poems... you never know, maybe one day you'll see your name up in lights!!!!!!

Answer 2

WOW **** Very Nice !!!! **** Beautiful
Girl I feel for you thankgod I havent had my heart broken .. But I'd like to copy and send it to a friend of mineI think It will be perfect for her & her situation I really think it will help put a voice to her pain Hope you dont mind .. Thanks for putting it out there for us to read ! Ill pass it on to her !

Answer 3

Well put! You have written a very nice poem. Keep up the good work and maybe I'll get to read your poems in a book one day. Thanks for sharing!

Answer 4

Two thumbs up says I...would also make great lyrics for a song.

Answer 5

very good.