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Question

I have to write a 22-episode season teen-drama show for my creative writing/theater arts class. Here's the first one and a half episodes. Let me know what you think of it, good or bad, interesting or boring, any ideas on how to improve, etc? Thanks.

Episode 1: http://teenforums.student.com/viewtopic.php?t=262721
Episode 2: http://teenforums.student.com/viewtopic.php?t=262964

Answer 1

Great work.