there's a woman living for today
there's a man who hopes and prays
there are kids who wonder if he'll stay
their is a God who took him away
could this be another sad day? will it be worse than yesterday?
will he live to see tommarow? or will he lay in pain in sorrow?
theirs so many questions,but not so many ansewers
so i sit on my bed and wonder and think......if he would have lived
who would he be today?
it was a poem i wrote for my cousin ethan,
2007-02-21 04:19:53 · 7 answers · asked by Tayda 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
did he died? sorry.
2007-02-21 04:31:09 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a beautiful peom, this is something to reflect on. Thank you for posting it here, it is beautiful.
2007-02-21 04:26:03 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that it was pretty good I'm sorry bout ur lost
2007-02-21 04:24:14 · answer #3 · answered by Victoria M 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ur poem is fabulous....n me too i wrote poems am fond of it and it seem zat my poems r similar of urs as zer r always loads of questions in it zat no one can answer:)
cheer and continue writting poems.
2007-02-21 04:25:45 · answer #4 · answered by simply me 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful
2007-02-21 04:23:33 · answer #5 · answered by Simply Sasa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that is very good one of the best i would have it published. sorry about ur loss.
2007-02-21 04:33:51 · answer #6 · answered by COLTS_MUSTANG_FAN_2008 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was very good yet sad
2007-02-21 04:28:01 · answer #7 · answered by yup 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋