i have some homework that has 2 be handed up 2morow i have 2 pretend im a convict but i dont no what else 2 wright this is al iv got and need more plz help me theres a few spelling mistakes but ill fix it up later thx heaps
Im a convict woman i've been transported to Australia
i have reasuntly stolen some clothes
after i was transported my job was to be a servent i was
transported for stealing lambs i was born in England
Manchester. i was born in 1794 and was convicted
in 1890
when i was getting transported pirates ataccted the ship
i was in. i was a single woman traverling on the ship so it was kind of hard
for me
i didnt no anyone i met a man on the ship but when we got off we got of we split and never
seen him again.
he never seen his child he didnt even no i was pregnet
so i brang up our baby girl by my self
i died a worthy single woman and was very happy.
2007-02-20 21:33:40 · 4 answers · asked by sxc biatch 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
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Check your spelling.
You will receive a "0" for your paper without the teacher reviewing, due to the butchering of words.
Seriously, I think spelling has as much to do with content as anything.
Can't read it.
2007-02-21 00:52:01 · answer #1 · answered by HottNikkels 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you doing just an outline? Or the whole story? What type of a servant was she? What skills did she learn..it had to be enough to support the baby...facinating....I'm just unsure as to what you needed for tomorrow...I kinda had fun with it...
I was born in Manchester England in 1794. I was poor and had no means of employment. So, in 1890 I was convicted of stealing clothes as well as some lambs. My punishment was to be shipped to Australia to serve my sentence there. As I was lead to the ship that would take me half way across the world, my heart became gripped with fear. How would I survive? Surviving in Manchester was different. Australia was a whole different country. As I walked up the long plank to the ship, I could smell the pungent odors of salt and fish. I stood on the deck listening to the waves gently lap against the hull. Then the sound of my shackled feet and chains woke me from my revere. As I began my descent into the bowels of the ship, a foul smell of rot and urine hit me with brutal force. Was this to be my home for the next months? I shuddered.
Hehehehehe....sorry...Good luck!
2007-02-20 23:51:03 · answer #2 · answered by yiqqahah 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There are 3 things I would correct: according to your dates, she was transported when she was 96 which makes bearing a child impossible.
Also, you hint at the possibility of a rape situation. The hint is tantalizing but think you need to add another line describing a little better what occurred or leave that part out completly.
Lastly, was she convicted for stealing clothes or a lamb?
It's quite good actually. Hope you get a Great Grade...
2007-02-20 23:09:37 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Elaborate on why you stole the clothes and the lambs. Were you hungry or just a rotten person?
Describe the man on the ship. What characteristics did he possess? Was he a good guy?
What did you do after you got off the ship. How did you support yourself and your child? Describe your daughter's character. Did she contribute to your happiness?
2007-02-20 23:07:57 · answer #4 · answered by dkrgrand 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋