Please!!I need a haiku(5-7-5 haiku) I will be happy if the haiku is about fishes,rainbow....anything about nature will do...but please not about summer,winter,sping and all those season.(there must be a total of 17 words in the haiku and 5-7-5)
2007-02-20 20:07:11 · 3 answers · asked by tres 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Here's two ...
Moonless winter night—
a billow of rising fog
hides the distant pines
sputtering engines
of the lobster boats at noon . . .
gulls flutter away
2007-02-20 20:13:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Stephan there are quite a quantity concerns, even traditionally with connection with the haiku, and many times talking 17 syllables has grow to be a classic, a minimum of westernized, contained interior the 5-7-5. i prefer to have faith you have studied the varieties, even dating shrink returned, and that i understand you do in assessment to Senryu, yet a haiku, in my concepts is already a condensation of what might ideal be wordy, pared each and each of how all the way down to succinct, even a study between the lines piece, and you have performed that throughout lots of instances. Contemplation concerns in haiku. prestige before it no beginning up up, yet in it there is not any ending "it" being the operative and interpretive be huge conscious.
2016-11-24 21:36:04 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hiaku have 5 7 5 pattern counting syllables not words
my heart aches with pain
when i see you i vomit
die away from me
see how easy it is?
2007-02-20 20:16:56 · answer #3 · answered by jeffrey m 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋