For the rhyming part at least?
What is love?
What is love?
What is this feeling inside me?
Is this some thing you can see?
Is it sent from above?
Is this love?
Is it never ending like a water fall?
What is love afterall?
Love, is as a bird, beautiful and elegent, such as a dove.
And could some one maybe email me and help me understand more about the meters? PLEASE!! Thank you!
2007-02-20 14:35:29 · 12 answers · asked by toxic0candy 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
If you put a rhyming couplet at the end you will have a Shakespearian style sonnet. The traditional metre for this is iambic pentameter which simply means that there are ten syllables to a line.
If you need more help e-mail me.
2007-02-21 00:15:00 · answer #1 · answered by Dr No 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The best part is:
"Is it neverending like a waterfall? / What is love after all?"
But you got your spacing wrong.
The rest of the poem uses rhymes that have been used a LOT in the past. Love/dove/above ..... try to put "love" in the MIDDLE of your sentences so you don't have to use these rhymes.
There is actually a song by the Gershwins:
"Blah blah blah blah moon,
blah blah blah blah love,
blah blah blah blah June,
blah blah blah above,"
Meaning that you can predict the rhymes.
But I really like the "waterfall / after all" part. Nicely done.
2007-02-27 17:48:58 · answer #2 · answered by klb_72 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
how old are you? i wrote those kinds of poems when i was in grad 5, no offense... its okay. if that is how you feel. all that matters are your feelings. try thinking about a lot to help you put more meaning in it.
2007-02-21 01:51:55 · answer #3 · answered by .:XeAh:. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
E-mail me and I will explain whatever you need to understand about metre, scansion, etc.
2007-02-26 19:36:29 · answer #4 · answered by Anpadh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good poem you can enter into a poem contest
2007-02-21 02:13:31 · answer #5 · answered by eunice norvor 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it! keep writing poems i think you have talent!
2007-02-28 06:05:21 · answer #6 · answered by angel princess 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's a good poem.
2007-02-20 22:39:40 · answer #7 · answered by LadyLindsay 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
that's really good! i'm impressed and slightly jealius (i have no talent for poetry, hehe) g/j!
2007-02-20 22:44:12 · answer #8 · answered by Neferiel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Stellar! I love it.
2007-02-20 22:44:04 · answer #9 · answered by T-Vol 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2007-02-20 22:40:21 · answer #10 · answered by Osmel L 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋