Im too dead to feel alive you thrive on my weekness and pain to you its all a game my heart beats in rythem of the dead and forgotten, young hearts rotten from no one to care, you dare take a chance to feel the unreal of life
2007-02-20 12:25:10 · 10 answers · asked by wonderfully_regretful 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
its the best poem if ever heard of
2007-02-28 08:46:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The angst of a spirit wounded and realizing that love leaves scars. The despair of the first emotional depths and the self loathing as the only possible likeness to the pain must be death. Martyrdom of a young heart in agony while the Villain vampirelike grows stronger seemingly from the victims wounds. Life can never be as it was ever again. Great transition into adulthood and the cruelty of love unrequited. You should be an admirer of Emily Dickinson if you aren't already.
Check this out it leads to "Because I Could Not Stop For Death" by Dickinson and you may enjoy it.
http://quotations.about.com/cs/poemlyrics/a/Because_I_Could.htm
2007-02-26 22:27:20 · answer #2 · answered by Robert B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are depressed. You need to reach out for help from family or friends and know there are people out there that care about you.....see a doctor or therapist or counselor.......whatever you do....there's always someone out there with worse problems...and trust me, I have been dealing with a bad situation too and I refuse to let it get me down! Let's hang in there and make the best of what we have. Good luck!
2007-02-20 12:38:41 · answer #3 · answered by dapperdoll 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it sounds great. Don't listen to those people who say that just because you write depressing poems means you need help. That could just be your way of feeling better. Listen to the song, "Join Me In Death" by the Finnish band H.I.M. They aren't depressed, it's just good music.
2007-02-27 17:09:44 · answer #4 · answered by Raven 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should write death metal lyrics ,
only don't use hearts,
you robbed my corpse, weakness, pain and forgotten lashes of you forked tongue , forced me, forces unlife , and a rotten lingering odor , to remember you by.
2007-02-20 12:36:16 · answer #5 · answered by black market dentistry 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds pretty good to me.
2007-02-20 12:35:42 · answer #6 · answered by Nancy M. 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats good.
2007-02-20 12:34:50 · answer #7 · answered by AnyaNledo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I THINK IT'S KIND OF ON THE WIERD SIDE!
2007-02-27 06:33:22 · answer #8 · answered by Motherof2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
inspiring
2007-02-27 13:16:57 · answer #9 · answered by Christelle M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good
2007-02-20 12:29:24 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋