Just your interpretation of what you think I mean..
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The spetre rode down,
and kissed me upon
my shoulder.
And bared its white
teeth for all to see,
turning it into a grin.
The sin burned
deep into my soul
I held onto the promise,
of a kiss
and lifted my soul
high up.
Up so high, I was in bliss.
So tight, so tight you held
me until I couldn't
breath.
Death took me by the arm
by the shoulder
and buried my soul
so I could not see.
2007-02-20 11:51:49 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
that's easy. It is referencing love and marriage.
only those that have lived through this will know the true meaning.
bridging a kiss with death is the basic premise here. funny how we all sell our very lives for something that destroys us.
2007-02-20 11:53:46 · answer #1 · answered by user name 5 · 4⤊ 1⤋
Ok, i've taken a different road...
I beleive you are talking about drugs... Please dont take this the wrong way - we all see and read into things differently...
The spetre rode down,
and kissed me upon
my shoulder.
I dont know what SPETRE means, so i have taken it as SCEPTRE - as a wand or a rod... so I have read it as a needle kissing your shoulder - inviting you to try it.
And bared its white
teeth for all to see,
turning it into a grin
I beleive this was the drugs taunting you and daring you to try it.
The sin burned
deep into my soul
I held onto the promise,
of a kiss
and lifted my soul
high up.
I beleive this means you were aware it was dangerous but couldnt get out of your head the wonderment the drug could possibly make you feel.
Up so high, I was in bliss.
So tight, so tight you held
me until I couldn't
breath.
I beleieve you now took the drug that made you feel fantastic to the point of utter excitement and you were captivated.
Death took me by the arm
by the shoulder
and buried my soul
Now you know you are hooked, your capture (the drug) has you by the arm and it is making you do things you are not proud of and thus has taken your soul.
so I could not see
You now have no choice in what you do or say so you chose not to see the damage it has caused you or those around you.
I am probably off by a long shot, but as I said, thats what the poem said to me when I read it the first time...
2007-02-20 12:31:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Cool. It's about love. There is nothing wrong with it; you should write more or post a blog or do something expressive.
2007-02-20 12:49:27 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Here is what I get. You fell in love with someone you thought you never would. However, your first instinct was correct and he broke your heart.
How did I do??
2007-02-20 12:02:18 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
fear of pain or agony, especially when it comes to dying.
2007-02-20 11:59:41 · answer #5 · answered by larryclay2006 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋