2007-02-20 03:48:30 · 2 answers · asked by what ever ? 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
the sky is raining diamonds
untile they came
and took the angle away
is thise a nature haiku ?
2007-02-20 03:58:55 · update #1
I can feel myself
Relaxing as the water
Rushes past my feet
Birds voice their beauty
As they are gliding over
Touching the tree tops
As I look into
The river water’s mirror
I can see clearly
At night in the plains
The crickets practice their songs
Mating melodies
The stars shine so bright
Heaven can’t be miles away
For it is right here
2007-02-20 03:53:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dry leaves, golden glow
Dry smells, sunflowers and clover
Dry winds, summer heat
A haiku is 5, 7, 5 syllables if it is on any other topic but nature it is a senyru.
2007-02-20 11:53:36 · answer #2 · answered by Sophist 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋