Its like Im spinning in circles, surpassing the fall
The world spins around me and I still see it all
The memories play like circulating movie scenes
My speculation was wrong cause now its not what it seems
The rememberance of the sky in the background
The memories play without a solitary sound
Your presence stays here right beside me
But to my surprise you stay in the shadows to be unseen
I remember the day when the tears fell from my eyes
And how you said your most precious goodbye
I stood there awaitng to see your smile brighten
But it didnt happen, and my grip on your hand began to tighten
Through the window I watched the sun fade away
The darkness of the sky let the stars come to play
The everlasting lonliness seems to never disappear
And I realize sometimes things can be just so unclear.
2007-02-20 02:31:33 · 12 answers · asked by sweet18apparatus 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
10 from 10 and star from me
2007-02-20 02:36:59 · answer #1 · answered by micho 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes it's great you'd be a really good song writer or poem writer.On a scale of 1-10 you got a 10
2007-02-20 10:54:17 · answer #2 · answered by Jessica Ann S (Jess) 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
10 out of 10! I love it!!! Are there any more where these came from? It's like you can feel a looming sense of foreboding, it's very emotionally charged and vividly written. Two thumbs up!
2007-02-20 10:35:54 · answer #3 · answered by Queen Bee 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is really good. My best friend was killed on Sunday and this just sort of explains how I feel.
2007-02-20 10:36:18 · answer #4 · answered by Kaylin 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not bad at all, i give it 8
2007-02-20 10:36:07 · answer #5 · answered by TroubleRose 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it.I rate it a 9.
2007-02-20 10:43:21 · answer #6 · answered by Troy K 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ill give it 7 because i am a boring old toad
2007-02-20 10:36:59 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i dont feel like reading now but i bet its good
2007-02-20 10:37:06 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
so so I guess, maybe a bit like it goes no where.
2007-02-20 10:36:45 · answer #9 · answered by Cowboy Bob 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
great
2007-02-20 10:40:26 · answer #10 · answered by chris 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋