It's called 'The Dominatrix'.
It is 2060; all men are kept in vats and electronically fed the illusion that it is a male dominated society of 2007. In fact the world is run and populated solely by women who keep the men enslaved and deluded purely for their seed. There is one man, Wot, who it has been prophesied can fight the oppressors and bring in the new order of true reality.
Is it a winner?
2007-02-19 23:05:26 · 21 answers · asked by Silkie1 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Hello florrie f; you look attractive.
2007-02-19 23:17:16 · update #1
It's certainly gonna get the feminists champing at the bit. I'm can't wait for Germaine Greer's review!
Plus it's kind of like the battle of the sexes take on The Matrix.
2007-02-19 23:08:58 · answer #1 · answered by lazer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The title is really rather boring, maybe come up with something more original. Saying The Dominatrix will make people think the movie is about BDSM, probably not something alot of people want to see.
It sounds like a B Movie at best, I know you mention it being a novel, but comparitevely it doesen't sound very interesting at all. This novel would have been thought up 50 years ago it wou;d've been a hit, but it delves into everything that's already been done. Alot more originality would help your story more, think of something that's never been written about before.
I myself can think of at least 5 things off the top of my head that's never been written about before, but I won't give my own ideas away, I myself am presently writing a script. Also it may not be a good idea to throw out your ideas at people you don't know, people like to steal other peoples ideas all the time. Better to pitch your ideas to an agent or a publisher then telling it to people on Yahoo.
2007-02-20 07:22:17 · answer #2 · answered by y2kguyarea51 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Though I also like the idea of women taking over the world. Other than that it has real potential. Now the question is are you a good writer to fill the potential of the story line. I've read some awful books but they had a great story line but the writer was f*** horrible.
Keep up the good work.
2007-02-20 12:24:07 · answer #3 · answered by Second Chance 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ahh Silkie, i sort of drifted off then into that wonderful fantasy world. Right up until the part about one man fighting it. Cut him out babe and it will be the perfect existence and a wonderful hit novel.
2007-02-21 18:03:32 · answer #4 · answered by Baby 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Male-dominated 2007? You are living in a dream world, pal. Good luck with that.
2007-02-20 07:07:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
A feminist Matrix? Lame.
2007-02-20 07:13:02 · answer #6 · answered by remymort 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try 1957
A bit more realistic!
sounds like a good plot although your story and title lean towards The matrix! Dont you think?
2007-02-20 07:10:41 · answer #7 · answered by Chris W 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hope your one man dies quite early on as its men who have caused most of the atrocities the world.
2007-02-20 07:11:39 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think half the people who answered really understood what you were talking about. It sounds like it would have a descent shot, depending on how you write it. What's your writing style like?
2007-02-20 10:36:28 · answer #9 · answered by megan nichole 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you need to stop sexualizing The Matrix. Been there. Done that. I don't see how you are adding anything new.
2007-02-20 08:59:50 · answer #10 · answered by bardsandsages 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋