What do you think about my short film?

Question

http://films.thelot.com/films/18375
It took me about two weeks to Think Up the story, Edit it, And of couse Film it. I wondered what people would think about it, so here it is. Please give me your opinion. Thank you.

Answer 1

i really enjoyed it. it was thought provoking and realistic and the young guy acted stunned when you asked him how to use a razor. Like whatup with this dude he on something or is he just crazy? If you can't remember who you are or where you came from then you act like a homeless man and forage for what you can. this would make a good made for tv movie needs a good screen writer to add some flair here and there and maybe a love story to go along with the little girl ( the mama has to be there somewhere) a storm and boat accident in the beginning and happy ending. You got the rest figured out. for 5 min you did a really faniastic job without spending a fortune right?
!!2 thumbs up!!