Seeing red
Hearing the screams of the dead
No one can hear or see what I can
Why?
Does this make me crazy?
That I see no reflection in a pool?
Can you feel death coming?
Its screaming through
Worthless
No one loves me now
Im lost in my own world
Can you help me?
Save me from myself?
Death Rattle
I can hear him
He's waiting for you
I can see him now
He's in my head
Hurry
Save me
Before I...
Before I'm
I'm already dead
2007-02-19 16:19:21 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
guess if you know what its about
tis kinda obvious
2007-02-19 16:19:52 · update #1
This is actually a very good poem, most people might think you disturb but not me, we are all curious about death from time to time, but some of us are to afraid to ponder it for one minute lest we actually might, you know, die.
Anyway it is very well writen, if you can get it down some you could enter it in a poem contest on line.
2007-02-19 16:25:55 · answer #1 · answered by trhwsh 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I find this poem interesting and i think it will speak to a lot of teens. I personally and not effected by it. I stand strong and alone. I like it that way, and I dont fear death.
Good luck to you.
2007-02-20 00:24:50 · answer #2 · answered by moonkissedwarrior 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's brilliant!
2007-02-20 00:22:36 · answer #3 · answered by Tek ~aka~Legs! 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yea you need to have more fun dinkazoid
2007-02-20 00:22:26 · answer #4 · answered by Agent99 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋