please help me?

Question

please, help me to draft this letter. i am only 17.

Dear Rina,

There is some picture of India. It’s a very nice place to live but not for long time.
After 4/5 days everybody feels bore. Peoples usually are very good.
Winter is the best season to stay there. I bring all papers from Kerala.
I was there for 10 hours. Next month I have to go again.

Thanks,

Answer 1

Dear Rina,
Here are some pictures of India. It's such a nice place to live, but eventually I think I would like to move somewhere else. After four or five days, it starts to get a little boring. However, most of the people are very nice. I have found that winter is the best time to visit.

I brought all the papers from Kerala. I was there for about 10 hours. I have to go again next month.

Thanks,
(You)

Answer 2

Dear Rina,

Here are some pictures of India. The country and its people are very nice. However, I found it boring after a few days there. The best time to visit is during the winter. I bring all papers from Kerala (I was there for 10 hours). I will revisit India next month.