I been wanting to become a write for quite sometime now but it wasn't till something tragic happned in my life that I decided this was my passion so I wrote about a lost I suffered and til this day still hurts me so I took the time and I wrote this poem I had posted on another site and got some good reviews but not nearly enough as I'd like so here it is
Our Little Angel...
You were our little angel to be. Now you're in heaven watching over your mom and daddy.
The lost we feel is tearing at our hearts, for we loved you from the very start.
For the dreams we had for you that will never come true. The joys of watching you grow up we'll never get to do.
To feel your first kick, me and your dad will never get to feel . the sound of your cry we'll never get to hear.
For the five short months we got to bond with you, will last a lifetime in our hearts along with the memories of you.
2007-02-19 11:52:31 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
For the moment we had to say goodbye came way to soon. For the few short hours after you were born that we had with you, holding your little body, counting your tiny fingers and toes, Trying to memorize every little detail so we could remember how beautiful you are. Our little angel so brave for she smiled right to the very end. We were glad to receive the blessing of knowing how precious our little angel was. We want you to know baby angel that your mommy and daddy will love you forever and you'll always be a big part of our hearts.
Never to be forgotten but to be remember as our first child who touched our hearts.
Now take your journey to heaven don't be afraid my dear little one,
your grandpa is awaiting your arrival to welcome you with open arms.
2007-02-19 11:53:01 · update #1
I FEEL YOUR PAIN!!! I lost my baby when I was about 4 1/2 months pregnant. This touched my heart, and it feels good to know someone can relate. My grandpa also passed on a few yrs ago and I knew that he would watch over her. They play in the clouds together for now...I tell her everyday that mama loves her little angel and that one day we will reunite. Every word you wrote came out of my mouth and lies within my heart and his. Keep up the great work!!!
2007-02-27 11:37:23 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ Yaz ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your heartbreak and grief is vivid and clear. So sad that a tragedy inspires such emotion and expression.
2007-02-27 03:28:55 · answer #2 · answered by Robert B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very deep you made me cry. Very heart filling I felt your pain.
-L
2007-02-19 19:58:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
To be honest, i really like it :)
keep it up
2007-02-19 20:29:43 · answer #4 · answered by Paula 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its loss
2007-02-27 12:58:01 · answer #5 · answered by mushroom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋