Faces of doubt. A poem about children lost in life......?

Question

I wrote this just before i got passed for fostering.

In the faces of many childern,
the sadness we can see,
an unhappy life their living
yet our love is flowing free
but this they dont receive
from their so called family

To them a normal way of life,
is abuse they learn to accept,
and they do not realise ,
were the love in them is kept,
in their cold and bitter world,
young lives already wrecked.

then taken from that life,
doesnt help them with their fears,
from their innocent pure faces,
still fall the salty tears,
and this way they may feel,
for most of their young years.

Until that love they find,
their most important dream,
security we take for granted,
in their eyes now see the gleam,
not until their dreams come true,
will we see their faces beam.

Answer 1

That is wonderful! My friend was fostered for a time and she said it was the best thing that ever happened to her. Good on you!

Answer 2

i imagine that is staggering, I exceptionally loved the first 4 stanzas "She sits on my own in crowded position too each and each and every their personal is her excuse she ought to placed a popularity to each and each and every face yet “Oh” she say “what's the use” at the same time as i come upon such splendor in self abuse. yet once she had such staggering youthful eyes eyes that masked her doubts and fears of remote objectives and tearful goodbyes bringing her in route of the more beneficial advantageous years the years do bypass, she plans her getaway she shoots for the celebs and she misses and so she searches for more beneficial advantageous days in middle of the night needs and drunken kisses at evening she would watch for sleep, if it got here objectives of a existence and a love each and every evening and each and on a daily basis gone through an similar she lost her make certain to keep up the wrestle" per chance some thing else would properly be effective tuned, yet i love it

Answer 3

Well done and a very nice poem but where's the question ?

Answer 4

I liked it very much and I understand it xx

Answer 5

good luck in your fostring and hope you get it published before someone else does

Answer 6

sweatheart I hope you find what you are looking for.

Answer 7

very good

Answer 8

wow its really good..good job

Answer 9

aw..... i like it.

Answer 10

IT MAKES YOU WONDER ... HUH???

REAL NICE THANKS FOR SHARING