One day as i was walking
quietly not talking
being on my own
didnt want to look a clown
I thought of somthing wild
and sniggered like a child
i was being quite daring
people are now staring
strolling a little faster
somthing iv learned to master
when feeling rather silly
Im hot then faint then chilly.
growing dark around my vision
got to avoid collision
searching a fast exit
just want somwere quiet to sit
fleaing for the wall
and trying to run tall
hope its six foot high
hope it reaches to the sky
Can feel my feet get heavy
right, then, left,,keep steady
made it nearly reached the brick
think now i may be sick
just a few more steps to go
each one seems to grow
like wading through treacle
wish i was a beetle
someones passing by
my eyes now tell a lie
leaning back against the stone
thank god now they have gone
looking all around
can hear every single sound
blood pulsing through my ears
my heartbeat plays my fears.
Cant fini
2007-02-19 08:28:27 · 2 answers · asked by patsy 3 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
People who suffer panic attacks ,anxiety,depression or the like may understand this poem more .
2007-02-19 08:48:31 · update #1
I will finish poem
think i must be safe here
things begining to look more clear
now i do feel like a clown
better be on my way
and get somwhere today
dont want another day wasted
this comes a long time waited
the sun begins to shine
well! the one inside,thats mine
someone
says how are you freind
im fine i say ,on the mend
2007-02-19 08:56:54 · update #2
Thankyou for reading
2007-02-19 08:58:21 · update #3
What u say about panic attax makes sense to me... as I read it I felt hurrying and SCARED towards the end -- like the writer was imagining some terror that s/he just had to get away from FAST!!!!
Good poem BTW, very skilful.
2007-02-19 10:47:33 · answer #1 · answered by MBK 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kinda. some parts i can tell what you mean, some parts are a mystery wrapped in an enigma wrapped in a ditzy body.
2007-02-19 16:37:17 · answer #2 · answered by Neferiel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋