Sunny green meadows
with wild growing flowers
a lovers paradise
lanes lined with hedgrows
falls of delicate showers
for here we shall fantasize
carresing the moment
with gentle feelings of bliss
as warm soft breezes blow
the overwhelming content
of that first tender kiss
as rivers of emotion flow
the grass will whisper
while close to our ears
and carpet the earth were we lie
we induce our surrender
show our joy with tears
it is happiness makes us cry.
2007-02-19 07:23:05 · 12 answers · asked by patsy 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
OMG THIS is sooo great lol no seriously this is great!! II'm like soo into writing poems too!!
heres my e mail address so u can like send me more or we can chat or watever
estefygarcia93@yahoo.com
2007-02-19 07:31:26 · answer #1 · answered by ety 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I really like poetry and in my opinion I think it is very good although I like when Meadows and flowers are mentioned it's as though it's what is in your thoughts or fantasies on a nice summers day, my favourite poem is daffodils by Wordsworth very good
2007-02-19 15:31:15 · answer #2 · answered by Bernie c 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Excuse me, is that the Poet Laureate that's posed the question? Very nice too!
2007-02-19 15:29:04 · answer #3 · answered by More or less Cosmic 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think that is a very romantic visual love poem. Good Job!
2007-02-19 15:28:36 · answer #4 · answered by Robert G. 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very good Patsy-keep 'em coming
2007-02-19 15:28:38 · answer #5 · answered by Birdman 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I really liked it and think its really sweet and from the heart.
Ignore the philistines who wouldn't appreciate poetry if it hit them on the head. they're missing out on more than they know.
2007-02-19 15:30:15 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Wow, not sure where you were to get inspired to write this but I think I need to go there and get some.
2007-02-19 15:28:36 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
R U Kidding?!
I can't believe I wasted my time reading that crap!
2007-02-19 15:43:20 · answer #8 · answered by Hey Brittany, bend over!!! 1 · 2⤊ 1⤋
That's really lovely!!!
2007-02-20 16:16:06 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautiful
2007-02-19 15:46:06 · answer #10 · answered by justme 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋