i'm writing a descriptive essay on an ice cream sundae?

Question

how should i start it?
how should i end it?
ideas for many many many DESCRIPTIVE WORDS FOR ICE CREAM SUNDAE'S PLEASE.

The words have to have real effects on ppl who are reading the essay. such as mouthwatering, or excruciating or luxurious. Something like that. in the range of 7th - 10th grade vocabulary plz.

Answer 1

start with something like. An ice cream sundae can delight more senses than the obvious.
descriptive words: equisite, eye poping. tempting appearance that causes an intense drive, like a powerfull spell demanding, commanding to be devoured.
soft smooth sweet pleasant.ubiquitous fluffy mountain of whipped cream. This invention has passion for indulgence, and reputation for wackiness. as messy and irresistible as democracy itself. Creating one gives you the opportunity of self expression.
saturated with … and describe the toppings

Answer 2

excruciating is often associated with an indescribable pain. Also depends on the flavor. tantalizing, aroma, temptation, icy cold goodness. Describe the texture, smell, taste, touch, color, etc.

Answer 3

well my teacher gav me this advice....
wen ritin a descriptive essay....first start with the general description...like the genral things about wat all a sundae wud hav in it etc....
dont go in for details at this stage....
in the next para use more detailed despriptions,use a lot of adjectives
end it with why u love eating a sunday and y everyone shud b eating it...blah blah

Answer 4

Smooth, creamy, velvety, lush, buttery, and don't forget colors: crimson cherry, deep rich chocolate, oozing caramel. Just do it.

Answer 5

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Go here:
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sundae

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Translations for: Sundae
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Dansk (Danish)
n. - flødeis med frugt eller sovs

Nederlands (Dutch)
vruchtenijsje

Français (French)
n. - coupe glacée, sundae

Deutsch (German)
n. - Eisbecher

Ελληνική (Greek)
n. - παγωτό φρούτων με σιρόπι

Italiano (Italian)
gelato ai canditi

Português (Portuguese)
n. - sundae (m)

Русский (Russian)
пломбир, с сиропом, орехами, фруктами

Español (Spanish)
n. - helado con fruta y nueces

Svenska (Swedish)
n. - glasscoupe m garnering

العربيه (Arabic)
‏(الاسم) نوع من البوظه‏

עברית (Hebrew)
n. - ‮גלידה עם פירות, אגוזים ושירוב (סירופ)‬