is this a good name of a book? what do you think of it? (synopsis inside)?

Question

i have been writing some short stories, about this supernatural knight, in a futuristic apocolyptic world were swordplay is the major weapon of choice, however many people use firearms (called "firesticks") the knights name is blak sunshine, in this first pamphlet he fights his nemisis who happens to be a evil spirit who infests bodys. he is simply trying to regain his empire that he lost many many years ago. but during the way he changes. the first pamphlet is 8 pages (front and back) the second instalment will be a lot more. anyhow the name of the first instalment is called "Thunderkiss 3069--Bloodlust" the title of the second will be "Thunderkiss 3069 Rage Against the Earth" so far it is just first drafts. (and when it is finished it will be in much better grammar than what i put this question in)

in "rage against the earth" (which isnt written) im thinking that there will be a major destruction of various parts of the earth

you see he can create electricity, fire, and he can morphe into a giant monster. his ability to create electricity and fire on a catastrophic scale (when he wants too) --he also weilds a giant swiehander sword too

this is all subject to change, but in general blak sunshine always has his armor on (hinting that his body is gruesome) the thunderkiss thing is just that his fighting moves are like thunder, the kiss part is the other characters, the other characters always change for the better. the third installement will deal with the history of him and the world (im thinking of calling it Moon Wars--it all depends on how the character changes and how i want his history to be--but he will be extraterrestrial) the knights name is cause his armor is black, and he seems to radiate a evil (black) glow, a sword of an normal person couldnt stand a chance against a firstick but blak sunshine is different, (he has already took an out 2000 soldiers armed with firesticks, with just his evil energys) the world have undergone a total change, due to a war with aliens and people--it pretty much destroyed this world, and they gave up, but not after specially enginering some SOLDIERS to fight the humans.

Answer 1

Wow. Sounds like you have quite a world going on there. I'm wondering about Thunderkiss. Is that supposed to explain the way he fights? Is it like a kiss with a big boom? And it might not seem like it, but I am being serious, because I'm trying to figure it out.
Also, are you tied to the name of the knight? Sunshine just doesn't seem to go with your character, though you might be going back to what he was before all this stuff started happening to him.
The idea about swordplay sounds good and I like the term firesticks. Can a knight that uses a sword stand up against a a firestick? Probably yes, right? Is it his armor? How did the world get to this point or is it a different world altogether? Sounds interesting.

Answer 2

The title sounds ok..but it doesn't seem like he is raging against the earth but instead the nemisis. How about The Thrown of an Empire.....sort of like a spin on the word throne...since he is going to throw the current emperor off the throne that is rightfully his

Answer 3

I'd have to read more. Still, the title should be relevant to the story material; where is "Thunderkiss" mentioned in these works?

Answer 4

that great