As the sunshine dims i bid my goodbye's.And then i climb to the tallest mountin way up high.As i take a leap and i am plunging twors my death i think my last words.For you i would die
2007-02-18 11:05:30 · 8 answers · asked by ajmihaly 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's a very sad but yet romantic poem! What are you planning to title it? A little advice: I would replace "tallest" with a more descriptive adjective--it matches your tone like "sky-touching"?
2007-02-18 11:15:09 · answer #1 · answered by sciencenerd 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Um, no. It's creepy. And like promoting suicide. If I love someone, I love them. I wouldn't die for them though. Life is too ******* awesome.
Here's a good poem:
Jacob Fo Facob
Likes Makeup
MY COUSIN!
2007-02-18 19:12:05 · answer #2 · answered by Natalia 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
it's ok, I didn't see what you were trying to say; I didn't even feel any emotion in it but it most have taking a lot of thought to come up with it.
2007-02-18 22:02:24 · answer #3 · answered by sherree33853 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well...it does express a certain feeling...but it also gives the reader a sense that you want to kill yourself
2007-02-18 19:09:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes
2007-02-18 19:15:57 · answer #5 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow that is so emotionally powerful it made me cry...I loved it.
2007-02-18 19:10:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
*sniff* that's a really pretty poem, but it's sad. would you really die for me?
2007-02-18 19:09:18 · answer #7 · answered by shellbee 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's ok!!!
2007-02-18 19:21:15 · answer #8 · answered by ....FED UP............ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋