After writing the first draft of a paragraph that explains why you like your favorite type of music,?

Question

10. After writing the first draft of a paragraph that explains why you like your favorite type of music, you
notice that a few of your ideas are repeated several times. You also realize that one idea should be
moved nearer to the beginning of the paragraph. Which step of the writing process should you now
use to correct these problems?

A. Prewriting C. Revising
B. Planning D. Presenting

i think its a. am i right?

Answer 1

Rewriting is the stuff you do before writing--pre = before. When you prewrite, you write down all of your ideas, and it does not matter what order it is in. The "first draft" is sometimes the pre-writing. Therefore, the pre-writing is already done in this example. Planning is also something that is done before writing, deciding what you are going to say and how long your paper is going to be, etc. Therefore, planning should also be already done in this example. Revising is where you look over your paper and try to make it better. When you revise, you try to make your paper more interesting or easier to read. Revising is done after the first draft... hmmm, sounds like this is probably revising then, right? Let's check out the last answer, D, first, before answering ... presenting is when you are completely finished with the paper and you're ready to show everyone else. So it's definitely not presenting. Which leaves revising as the correct answer.

Answer 2

Definitely (C) revising.

It is not (A) prewriting, because prewriting implies outlines and other organizational tools used before writing the paper.

It is not (B) planning, because this also indicates the paper has not yet been started.

It is not (D) presenting because, clearly, the paper needs work before it is presented.

This leaves (C) revising. This paragraph needs to be edited, or revised, to correct problems like repetition and order of ideas.

I hope I was able to help.

Answer 3

Any kind of song is positive as long because it has no longer something offensive in it. I choose Jazz and Oldies R&B. i like song from the 60's and 70's something that places you in a mellow temper.

Answer 4

It's C,revising. Revising means to improve what you have written by changing your words or taking extra ideas out.

Answer 5

(C) fo sho