If your eyes gleam with hope,
If your waiting for love,
All you ever need to do,
Is look up at the stars above.
No matter where you are,
StarClan will be by your side,
No matter what happens to you,
We will match your every stride.
Battle rages on, cats claws rake your pelt,
The stench of blood fills the air,
You feel as if your losing,
But you are unaware,
StarClan will protect you, through thin and thick,
And you are never alone,
Even if you are on your last rope,
Or venturing in the unknown.
2007-02-18 06:10:40 · 8 answers · asked by KM 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
!!!Thats really brilliant, excellent I mean it!
I showed it to my son who's 13 and he thought it was cool..
The lines are so descriptive I could picture all the images..I really love the last verse.
u should enter this in a competition
congratulations
well done, keep it up,u have a great talent!
2007-02-18 06:28:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's a "starclan." If you ask people who don't know what you're talking about to rate a piece of poetry, you should explain it first?
Because of the content... It is too personal. and in all honesty,
A bit sloppy too.
Is it prose or poetry? The meter is all messed up if it is not prose and it is too rhymed if it is???
2007-02-18 14:20:31 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
8/10
2007-02-18 14:16:14 · answer #3 · answered by baboo b 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Uh, kinda weird, but its okay i guess. I dont really like cats, i am more of a dog person and it needs some work on transitioning.
2007-02-18 14:15:12 · answer #4 · answered by m h 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
needs some work
2007-02-18 14:13:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice pic , you got smoke in your eye lol
2007-02-18 14:18:54 · answer #6 · answered by BajaRick 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I love it! So creative
2007-02-18 14:13:25 · answer #7 · answered by strawberry fields 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice
2007-02-18 14:17:56 · answer #8 · answered by Shay Boogie 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋