Need help with my objective...filling out an application for an internship with SCA (StudentConservatonAss.)?

Question

Here is what I have so far.....

"To obtain a position in the conservation or environmental field to further develop my deep interest in the environment and related fields. I believe that through an internship I will be able to serve and interact with the community. "

These are the directions they gave me...

In 300 words or less, why do you want to serve as an SCA Conservation Intern? What are your specific goals for the experience? -

Do you think I have fulfilled their request? Any advice will be helpful thank you.

Answer 1

I think you need to be more elaborate in specifying your goals. You could perhaps add a short para on what your interaction is likely to achieve, such as: making more and more people conscious of the need to conserve the environment which is a concern of all living being (not only those actively involved), the consequences of abusing the environment, what are the practical ways a citizen could contribute to the movement, how the entire society benefits from preserving the environment, etc.
You could also touch upon how your interaction with other members/volunteers would help you to improve your knowledge and broaden your vision, expose you to fresh ideas and enhance your love for environment.
These are a few ideas for you to consider.

Answer 2

I serve SCA during one summer back in 1989..it was hard work and fun experience for the 10 students that was with us..

Each day, one of us would be Team leader and so forth..

hope you enjoy your time with SCA