I can't believe,
It's happend again,
The girl he has charished,
Has left him again,
Don't you worry there,
They'll be back,
Just wait & see,
He will crawl back to her
On his knees.
2007-02-17 17:07:53 · 5 answers · asked by Shelb-N-Ator [[H!ATD]] 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
It is good I change a little for you hope you don't get mad!
I can't believe it,
It's happened again,
The girl he cherished,
Has left him again,
Don't you worry about it,
She will be back,
Just wait & see,
She will be back,
On her knees.
2007-02-17 17:25:21 · answer #1 · answered by Angel 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like this one as much as the other two I've read but it's ok. It seems to me your heart wasn't truely into this one. Almost like it was forced. It's ok, just not great.
2007-02-17 17:12:34 · answer #2 · answered by just jenn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bad, because it doesn't quite make sense. She should be crawling back. Sorry.
2007-02-17 17:17:28 · answer #3 · answered by CB 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What is this ?,an attempt at writing?
2007-02-17 17:59:09 · answer #4 · answered by Direktor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok
2007-02-17 17:11:33 · answer #5 · answered by 4 strings 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋