Sometimes we can't control ourselves,
The feelings we have inside,
I think we are better off this way,
Now I'll go run & hide,
I can't help to think of what came out,
In the bittersweet end,
But it doesn't matter anymore,
I'm so glad your we're still friends.
2007-02-17 17:07:22 · 3 answers · asked by Shelb-N-Ator [[H!ATD]] 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
last sentence change.
I'm so glad we're still friends.
2007-02-18 03:43:43 · update #1
Try expanding your word choice a little more. Try to paint a picture using words. Rewrite the last sentence... it doesn't make sense.
2007-02-17 18:59:06 · answer #1 · answered by Bruschetta 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Excellent. You are a very talented writer.
2007-02-18 01:10:53 · answer #2 · answered by just jenn 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's alright....
2007-02-18 01:59:51 · answer #3 · answered by Direktor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋