I carried you to this destination,
And leave you out on your own,
Maybe if you give me an invitation,
We will speak agian,
We'll speak of all the good thats happend,
And the unfortunate too,
But I'm still wanting to say,
I love you too.
2007-02-17 17:06:38 · 13 answers · asked by Shelb-N-Ator [[H!ATD]] 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
It's good. I think at first it sounds like this person is in love or at least has deep feelings when you say: "Maybe if you give me an invitation, We will speak again". Then, at the end, this person says that they are not in love. I think this poem conveys someone that's emotionally confused.
2007-02-17 17:26:54 · answer #1 · answered by Pseudonym 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I will walk to the destination need not to carry me,
I would like to be with you,
Do you really need an invitation,
Silence is real pleasure,
I bet in this way nothing will happen,
everything is already written,
still you want to say something?,
No place& time to hate in my heart.
2007-02-18 01:18:22 · answer #2 · answered by pankaj s 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yea
2007-02-18 04:10:18 · answer #3 · answered by ஐ♥Julian'sMommy♥ஐ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice keep up the good work
2007-02-18 01:10:11 · answer #4 · answered by dee_ann 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its alright,not shakespere
2007-02-18 01:10:35 · answer #5 · answered by 4 strings 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bad.
2007-02-18 01:09:17 · answer #6 · answered by Speedy 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
nice poem
2007-02-18 01:12:33 · answer #7 · answered by rebelady28379 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very very good
that is good poem
i love poem
2007-02-18 01:10:27 · answer #8 · answered by Rounash 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
PRETTY GOOD
HAVE A NICE DAY
2007-02-18 01:08:39 · answer #9 · answered by sharrron 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
2007-02-18 01:09:33 · answer #10 · answered by kathleen h 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋