I am not good at writing poems but this is our 1 year anniversary. I need your opinions as to whether it is any good and any suggestions you may have to make it better. Please be honest. Thanks in advance.
One year is not a long time
But I'm just so glad to know you're mine
Seeing you everyday
Makes me happy
So does knowing that your love for me will always be
I know we can't always be near
But my love for you is so strong that your touch I long to feel
And your voice I always long to hear
I know it may not seem as though I always care
But please don't have any worries
For I will always be there
This year has been so great for me
I do think that you would agree
I hope that there are many more
For I need you evermore
And one more thing that I must say
Despite the doubts I have gone through
I jst want you to know that I will always love you
2007-02-17 11:58:43 · 3 answers · asked by usa_grl15 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
yeah.. um.. im gonna have to agree with the 1st guy who answered. plus it lacks... consistency. its all kind of thrown down on the page and it really has no effect on the person reading it..
2007-02-17 12:08:40 · answer #1 · answered by onedrop808 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry. sounds a little too full of lines used in a sappy love song...
2007-02-17 20:03:07 · answer #2 · answered by anjali 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is straight from your heart to the heart of your love....it is beautiful. Happy Annivrsary!!
2007-02-17 21:59:45 · answer #3 · answered by I am Sunshine 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋