One man was unlucky,he throw out on the road through the glass window on a minibus. He lost a lot of blood in the accident.Other passengers were broke their hands and legs and they all feared to see a terrible scene.
Police asked questions to passengers and victims. They investigated and found to be cause happened accident of reasons.Police also tested drivers who is drinking how much of alcohol.
Someone around the accident discusssed about this event.They said minibus driver was driving very fast and passengers should use safty belt which is reducing dangerous.Reporters rushed to arrived accident place to interview policeman and victims.
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2007-02-17 02:05:16 · 7 answers · asked by maggie33 m 1 in News & Events ➔ Current Events
There was an accident today involving a minibus and another unknown vehicle. One passenger was was thrown through the windshield of the minibus, landing on the pavement. There was a tremendous amount of blood loss. Other passengers suffered broken limbs and were traumatized by the horrific scene.
Police questioned all passengers and investigated the cause of the accident. Their findings were inconclusive, so each driver was tested for alcohol consumption.
The media rushed to the scene to interview police and victims alike.
A witness discussed the event: It was stated that the minibus was going at an excerated speed. The witness commented that uses of seat/safety belts could have reduced injuries.
2007-02-17 02:18:55 · answer #1 · answered by Enchanted 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you an ESL learner? First of all the word "English" (when It refers to the English language or the study of the English language)is always capitalized no matter where it appears in a sentence,
Here are my corrections and changes :
One man was very unlucky. He was thrown through the glass window of a minibus onto the road. He lost a lot of blood. Other passengers had broken hands and legs. They all were afraid to look at the terrible scene.
The police asked questions of the passengers including the victims. They investigated to find out the reasons for the cause of the accident, They tested the driver to see how much alcohol he had been drinking.
Someone who had witnessed the accident discussed what happened with the police. He(or she) said that the minibus driver was driving very fast. The passengers were not using seat belts which could have reduced the danger of being injured.
Reporters rushed to arrive at the scene of the accident to interview the policemen and victims.
Hope this helps a little bit. If you're taking an English compostion class, perhaps your teacher or another student can help you out further. Good luck!
2007-02-17 02:37:17 · answer #2 · answered by susandiane311 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
One man was unlucky. He was thrown out onto the road having been thrown through the windscreen of the minibus. He lost a lot of blood in the accident. Other passengers suffered broken arms and legs and were frightened seeing the terrible scene.
Police questioned the passengers and the injured. An investigation revealed several reasons for the accident. The minibus driver was driving very fast and the passengers should have been wearing seat belts which would have reduced the injuries. The driver was also breathalysed to determine if he had been drinking alcohol.
Reporters quickly arrived at the scene of the accident to interview police officers and victims.
2007-02-17 02:21:39 · answer #3 · answered by deebradley2000 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here's a corrrection :-
One man was unlucky. He got thrown out on the road through the glass window on a minibus. He lost a lot of blood in the accident. Other passengers broke their hands and legs and they were all scared to see a terrible tragedy.
Police asked questions of passengers and victims. They investigated and found reasons for the cause of the accident. Police also tested drivers who had been drinking alcohol.
Someone people at the scene of the accident discussed about the event. They said the minibus driver was driving very fast and passengers should have used the safety belts which reduce dangerous accidents. Reporters rushed to the scene of the accident to interview policemen and victims.
2007-02-17 02:19:34 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you send the question to my e-mail address I will correct it. It is so totally wrong I will not do a re-write here. You are obviously not English and I congratulate you on what you have done.
2007-02-17 02:18:42 · answer #5 · answered by Tony A 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
english composition comes by reading books but you can also buy books on it also attend night school at technical college
2007-02-17 03:58:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
No..
2007-02-17 10:59:50 · answer #7 · answered by viragotriker 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋