The moon OOOOOHHH the moon,
shines like a silver spoon,
Goes UP in the night
like a light,
and then goes down
like a mole in a hole.
2007-02-16 17:01:29 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Hey, the least you could do is tell me it's a great poem I'm trying to get famous! I have feelings too ya know, etc.
2007-02-16 17:33:29 · update #1
please spare the world your poetic prowess.
2007-02-16 17:10:52 · answer #1 · answered by whiteman 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Its cute,I don't find it to my taste I enjoy darker art but that is just me.Another thing you really should not put your poems on here as some people like to steal others work and claim it as their own because they can't write themselves.I do encourage getting your poems out in the world but just be careful of thieves.
2007-02-16 17:22:16 · answer #2 · answered by crysanialife 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Any poem is good to publish, as long as the poem have passion and it has meaning on the topic it talks about. You have a good topic to talk about, but you should make it more complex to make the poem more stronger.
2007-02-16 17:17:35 · answer #3 · answered by canadiangeoguy 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i really like it the words rhyme and since we are also doing a poem in our school we did one and it was a hard time i bet you should write more poems it should be published
2007-02-16 17:11:39 · answer #4 · answered by fReDs526 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
sounds like a winner to me.
2007-02-16 17:08:58 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
go to poetry dot com
2007-02-16 18:24:13 · answer #6 · answered by th3_2 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it is cute....yah you can get it published at any kids paper or teenages.
2007-02-16 17:06:54 · answer #7 · answered by Alkahest 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
You already did that.
2007-02-16 17:10:13 · answer #8 · answered by peacemakers3000 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
My publisher says it will work for our childrens book. Thanks for the freebee.
2007-02-16 17:06:56 · answer #9 · answered by papaz71 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
no
2007-02-16 17:08:39 · answer #10 · answered by treyjustice11 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋