this mountain?

Question

what do you think?

I seem to have failed all the tests
And till somehow put through to the next stage
I seem to have fallen so many times
Yet somehow I'm still part of the race

This mountain, in not the mountain I wish to climb
But I must reach its peak, before I can reach mine

And though I keep sliding and hurting my arms
The rope is still tugging for me to go on
I rather sit and stare at the snow
But it through its cold, it seems, I have to go

This mountain, in not the mountain I wish to climb
But I must reach its peak, before I can reach mine

I feel like I lost, like I'm out, “game over''
But the world finds me, keeps me in, plays on
so... so...
it seem I have no choice..

This mountain, in not the mountain I wish to climb
But I must reach its peak, before I can reach mine

Answer 1

I've commented on your other writings so I must comment on this one, also. You know I love interpreting the things you write. This one is seems easy to me... you have a goal that you want to achieve but you must go through some unpleasant things to get there. You have support from people ('the world keeps me in') so you can't let them down. ('I have no choice.')
I doubt if this is so literal to mean you are climbing a real mountain. Your writings are deeper than that. Keep writing!

Answer 2

You're comparing reaching the top of a mountain to achieving a goal. Wow, that's quite an original thought. I'd copyright that...quickly.

Answer 3

If you wrote it your on the wrong site go to esnips.com , Poetry section and ask for comments or go to karaoke section and ask one of the musicians to writ some music for it, There`s quite a few original artists there