what do you think of my rap?
yo yo yo
i come to town looking for my main opposition
but no one's tough enough to handle my commission
so they can just keep on wishing and i'll keep on bitching
no one can stop me cuz i'm the outright best
and i get awards for being the best dressed guest
and bearing the wedding ring wearing bling bling
but you on the other hand can't take the heat
you knew from the start that i had you beat
don't worry dawg you know how great i am
are you going to visit the can for all the ham and jam you got from the canned Pam?
and kiss your love and miss and wish him bliss when he dissed you
2007-02-16 13:04:01 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it. You made that up? it's good you sound like slim shady
2007-02-16 13:07:22 · answer #1 · answered by Angry Little Fairy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First, Music is like candy you have to get rid of the rappers
second, capitalization is key, also grammar!!!
third, in the line "are you going to visit the can...." it sounds corny with all of those corny rhymes, can, ham, jam, pam, so it doesn't make sense.
fourth, none of these lines go together, you are looking for someone to fight, then you mention your married, and then your mentioning ham and jam (which doesn't go together at all).
fifth, its outright stupid, sorry but you asked what I thought of your rap (or crap, since thats what all rap is)
2007-02-16 21:13:55 · answer #2 · answered by Michelangelo 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds good!
2007-02-16 21:08:34 · answer #3 · answered by *COCO* 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
You lost me at Yo!
2007-02-16 21:08:26 · answer #4 · answered by a_r_cool123 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
i like it.
2007-02-16 21:10:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋