you told me to shut up! now I am gonna cry
oh crap I better ask something...umm when was the last time you were told to shut up?
2007-02-16 11:25:38 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
No no baby I'm sorry.
I was told to shut up a few seconds ago by that Big Bald foolio
2007-02-16 11:29:50 · answer #1 · answered by FoxyFoxy, Kickass Drama Queen 5 · 4⤊ 0⤋
I think there is a lot to be said for using downtime to practice technique;- much like a sportsman or a musician uses the nets or plays scales even on days when he's not in the mood. I thought this was very neat. It stays on-task throughout, there is a reasonable amount of narrative interest, and the rimes are snug without being obtrusive. Perhaps you won't want to keep this piece in your Collected Works, but one does improve with good quality practice - and this was certainly skillful. The only place I noticed the metre actually off was: I think I'll marry Justine, which is missing a whole foot. (Try slotting in [I think I'll just marry this Justine] to hear what a full line sounds like). Apart from that, there is a pattern of stressing the underlying iambic pentameter (especially in the fourth line of each quatrain); but setting up counter-rhythms is a general technique (especially in the vanilla metres) which I wouldn't fret over. An iambic quatrain with a trochaic fourth line (which is nearly what you do in your first verse) is even an established technique for comic poetry. W S Gilbert does it all the time; you may well have registered this subliminally and learned the trick. Picking up stuff without noticing it is good learning.
2016-05-24 08:02:56 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dragon doesn't get told to shut up. They can try, but she will just stick her tongue out at them and keep talking. :p
2007-02-17 01:07:08 · answer #3 · answered by VLIGER DRAGÖN 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't cry. Foxy is just a bit moody, she'll be okay soon.
2007-02-16 11:29:56 · answer #4 · answered by Cindi 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Who cares, just shut her up
2007-02-16 11:32:38 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
She's a little unstable at the moment, pay no attention.
2007-02-16 11:29:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like they have OCD and need therapy.
2007-02-16 11:30:08 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think she's just having a rough week....jerk of a P&S husband.
2007-02-16 11:29:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Ummm....I answered that question too, so technically she told me to shut up.....but I'm drinkin' so it don't matter! ;)
2007-02-16 11:29:15 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, I couldn't tell ya.
2007-02-16 11:28:54 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋