please leave your feedback , can i ever be a good writer that's my dreams , please reply fast
Let me flutter my wings ,
Without knowing till when they will last ,
Let me catch the glimpse of sunlight,
Without knowing about the arrival of the moon .
Let Me Be Oblivious .
Let me be enamoured by the singing birds ,
Without knowing when they will fly .
Let me count the blanket of stars ,
Without knowing about the radiance of the morning light .
Let Me Be Oblivious .
Let me walk a distant path ,
Without knowing when I’ll be tired .
Let me watch my crystal dreams .
Without knowing when they’ll fulfill .
Let Me Be Oblivious .
Let me play this game for a while ,
Without knowing my loss or gain .
Let me live my beautiful today ,
Without knowing about the mystery of tomorrow .
Let Me Be Oblivious .
2007-02-16 04:48:29 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Sounds really good!
2007-02-16 04:54:30 · answer #1 · answered by BBBrown 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Good. You have nice talent. Why do you suspect yourself?
Have faith in you and your talent. You will certainly become a good writer.
2007-02-16 04:58:33 · answer #2 · answered by Sai Tej 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm a song writer and singer and I believe you gave GREAT potential !!! Keep it up !
2007-02-16 04:55:07 · answer #3 · answered by Israel-1 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice mood work. Doesn't go anywhere.
Maybe it doesn't have to.
Loses my interest.
Needs alliteration and assonance.
Great idea.
Keep going.
And when you've gotten it, please school me, too. I try to write, too.
2007-02-16 05:09:06 · answer #4 · answered by starryeyed 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too long
2007-02-16 04:51:13 · answer #5 · answered by (_)iiiiD 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋