Dreaming stars in the night ,
Craving for something not right ,
Considering life to be a fight ,
Just because I am a teen .
Proving something unknown ,
Discovering something unseen ,
Believing something untrue ,
Just because I am a teen .
Screaming at the top of my voice ,
Creating a loud noise ,
Forgetting the words preached by the wise ,
Just because I am a teen .
Respecting nobody but me ,
Following nobody but me ,
Listening to nobody but me ,
Just because I am a teen .
Swimming against the tide ,
Discovering wings to glide ,
Gaining audacity for this ride ,
Just because I am a teen .
Tasting things as bitter as lime ,
Playing games depicting crime ,
Being rebellious all the time ,
Just because I am a teen
2007-02-16 04:23:02 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Being a teen myself I love it!
And you used the awesome word audacity and in the right context! Most teens don't even know what that means.
This poem beyond being good by just the word the meaning behind them is amazing. It tells the tale of what teens have to go through every day. It explains our life. You could also add more to this poem if you wanted but it is great just the way it is.
You should definately keep writing poems and posting them. Good luck and keep us updated!
2007-02-16 06:44:54 · answer #1 · answered by rismonstar 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is not mean to u if i just say it is nice, offcorse it is nice.
but the hiden thinkin in this poem shown u ar egood observatnt ,but me dear do not be negative observant but see positive aswell
like:
all world is flowery for u
as u want, trust me, u cud do.
u could realize dream unseen
just because you are a teen
wish u good luck
2007-02-16 12:58:01 · answer #2 · answered by atash 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hahaha.. not bad.
you write it?
Basically, it gives an impression of teenager,
exploring the moods and things at this age,
and wanting some form of justification.
2007-02-17 05:32:01 · answer #3 · answered by Blessed Person :-) 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
such a nice poem
2007-02-16 12:39:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its sound great. I like it that's for sure! ^^
2007-02-16 12:39:17 · answer #5 · answered by simple_smilez23 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋