As I age I think more clearly
Of the things I hold more dearly
I use to think the more I had
Would make me rich, make me glad
Now I look around and see
What really now means more to me
A simple hug, can start my day
I feel content, will never stray
I never thought that I’d be saying
That I’m done with games and playing
All and all, I have to say
That in my youth, I liked to play
But now, I’d rather spend my time
Telling kids a nursery rhyme
I never knew that from a book
Could warm my hear, just from their look
For those who feel they still have greed
Never helping those with need
Just invite them to a place
Buy their meal, and say grace
2007-02-15 21:46:16 · 7 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
Great poem! The only problem I have with it is, I didn't write it! 10!
2007-02-15 22:51:03 · answer #1 · answered by olderbutwiser 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i'll give it a 7 and a 1/2
i like it its nice but i've always hating rhyming in poems it makes them sound cheesy to me but thats just me. Its generally a good poem
2007-02-15 22:05:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This poem is truely a gem.Its meaningful and sensual.
I give a 9.
2007-02-15 21:53:20 · answer #3 · answered by Sheeth 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you made me cry. in a robust way. YOUR spouse IS THE LUCKIEST woman,(next TO ME, this is) XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO it takes a actual guy to jot down captivating words like that, my husband might write stuff like that, he in basic terms has dyslexia and a bad speller. i might could do a spell verify b4 i could study what he wrote,LOL unquestionably captivating
2016-09-29 04:46:55 · answer #4 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9.9
2007-02-19 15:00:17 · answer #5 · answered by misia 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good one gary. im hard to impress when it comes to poetry.....it raised my eyebrows.......8. Maybe cause im getting old! lol.
2007-02-15 21:59:54 · answer #6 · answered by kelstar 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'd give it a 9.5. great job and i enjoyed reading it
2007-02-15 22:02:21 · answer #7 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋