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Therefore, in this report some weaknesses will be evaluated in order to anticipate the next construction process and construction phase II and make an improvement based on the previous phases. The highlight on the weaknesses below should not be interpreted that the project *has gone bad*, but rather to serve as an evaluation to have the best result by minimizing such mistake as much as possible.
2007-02-15 21:21:36 · 9 answers · asked by Ron 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
'lacks success' or if my re-writing works for you 'lack of success'
Sorry I had to re-write too.
Therefore, in this report certain weaknesses are evaluated in anticipation of the next phase of the construction process and recommendations are developed for improvements based on previous experience. Evaluation of this project's weaknesses should not presuppose the project's lack of success, rather it should serve as a method of reducing the possibility of failure.
2007-02-15 22:35:06 · answer #1 · answered by birdwatcher 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I made other changes as well ... sorry, couldn't help myself.
In this report some weaknesses will be evaluated in order to anticipate the next construction process, construction phase II and make an improvement based on the previous phases. The weaknesses below should not be interpreted as the project *is failing*. It should serve as an evaluation to ensure the best result by minimizing such mistakes.
2007-02-16 05:38:15 · answer #2 · answered by lollipop 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that the project has *soured*, but rather to serve as an evaluation to have the best result by minimizing such mistake as much as possible.
2007-02-16 05:30:05 · answer #3 · answered by Jason W-S 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it means that project "has not been a failure" but by highlighting issues and providing sensible solutions for them major improvement can be had.
2007-02-16 12:03:31 · answer #4 · answered by Y_aurora 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Perhaps "is failing", however, the entire paragraph could do with being rewritten.
2007-02-16 05:26:30 · answer #5 · answered by Bethany 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think 'has failed' would be appropriate in this context
2007-02-16 05:27:26 · answer #6 · answered by kinvadave 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"has become ineffective" or "is ineffective", or "is beyond repair", maybe.
God bless.
2007-02-16 05:30:23 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
was unsuccessful
2007-02-16 05:36:40 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
has failed?
2007-02-16 05:30:53 · answer #9 · answered by name your god 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋