as i lay this pen to its pad
my eyes light up
and im not feeling so bad
im not ready to give up
and thats when she calls
and my heart skips a beat
im bouncing off the walls
but i know i cant compete
My darling Christine
how can i explain
you've got the beauty of a queen
you're driving me insaine
and i don't know what to do
so i call out her name
theres nothing left to say
as we throw around the blame
and cant believe
that you wont be mine
do anything for you
until the end of time
My darling Christine
how can i explain
you've got the beauty of a queen
you're driving me insaine
now i know that you've got him
so where thats put me
im losing my mind
i know i cant win
so i guess i'll go to sleep
for once and all
i'll pop as many pills
that will fit into my jaw
now i lay down to die
my last vew of the earth
and your filling my head
what was my life worth
My darling Christine
what can i do now
i cant fix things
i hope i made you proud
2007-02-15 18:13:19 · 10 answers · asked by Zach S 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Wow that is very deep. Brings a tear to your eye.
-L
2007-02-15 18:17:39 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Like the rhymes, like your emotions...
But wait! Is "your darling Christine" worth popping your mouth with pills and lay down dying in agony???
2007-02-16 03:02:04 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Going to be British here.......like the first four lines after that goes to hell Quit begging and what would make her proud how you swallowed all the pills with one glass of water. WAKE up shes not worth it she maybe a Queen but of what tird island.
Practical add vice when she calls don't answer.
forget about her.Don't let her keep you as back up when this guy does her like shes doing you now. your life is worth what you make it worth.find a better girl.
2007-02-16 02:43:25 · answer #3 · answered by Bruce S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What kind of music you play?? Metal or Country lord i hope that aint Rap........Made me think about Steven Kings novel Christine you know the one about the possed car
2007-02-16 02:24:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good rhyming, good job of getting the emotion your feeling across. However, I don't think one should commit suicide over a partner. Think of your family, friends, etc.
2007-02-16 02:17:58 · answer #5 · answered by lejumpsuit 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good except the last 3 passages.. they sound a little rushed and unfinished
2007-02-16 02:17:35 · answer #6 · answered by shelly 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it kinda sucks. no offense. but geez, your gonna throw your life away cause some 'darling christine' doesnt like you? please. its too pathetic to actually be good. nice try though. thumbs up!
2007-02-16 02:19:21 · answer #7 · answered by aphex_twin007 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i hope I made you proud does not seem to make sense
2007-02-16 02:23:26 · answer #8 · answered by monica your new bff 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its nice
2007-02-16 02:22:12 · answer #9 · answered by cuteashwini11 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmmmmmmmm. be into each word
2007-02-16 02:18:27 · answer #10 · answered by japanese hustler 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋