Well, it's nothing genius but what do you think?
Well, I tried to say I'm sorry
But you smiled and walked away
Now I know what life is
When your sky's painted grey
Time we shared was time wasted
Forever came so damn fast
On my lips, love was tasted
But lies never last
In your eyes
In your eyes
Where am I...
in your eyes
Well I tried to say I love you
But you smiled and turned your head
Now I know the heart break
Of a love left for dead
Your gone but here am I
Broken shell of yesterday
Photographs and love letters
Hold the pain that I pay
In your eyes
In your eyes
Where am I...
In your eyes
2007-02-15 13:49:20 · 5 answers · asked by luvnlife 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
The guitar part I made up is a kinda a rock/blues/folk jive. I can't tell if I like the words as much as I like the music......
2007-02-15 13:57:36 · update #1
That is wonderful -- I think it could easily become a song.
2007-02-15 13:53:41 · answer #1 · answered by ecogeek4ever 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
In one moment I lived
Suddenly I died.
Having you in my arms
moments frozen in time
I live to see you wake next to me everyday.
Feel the warmth of your soft skin is what I crave.
There would never be an end we always say
Only sunrises and harvest moons descend.
What a sweet time
Forever mine
All notion of love have now died
I never had smooth and cool grace
Never was blessed with a movie stars face.
Worked night and day
Tried my best to get us out of that trailer place.
You now wear someone else's ring.
A dream died, before a lifetime began.
Now I stare this walls alone, forever a broken-hearted man.
2007-02-15 22:11:33 · answer #2 · answered by saa932003 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Country or Rock
seem cool enough to me.
2007-02-15 21:53:20 · answer #3 · answered by ? 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
delete this question so no one claims your lyrics for their own
2007-02-15 22:54:54 · answer #4 · answered by lol!?? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool song!
2007-02-15 21:54:56 · answer #5 · answered by sassy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋