Relationship's Kite fly
A little boy was flying kite.
I sat wondering why,
Maybe he didn't know: hearts could fly.
I closed my world, slept for a while.
I dreamed of apples down beside.
Woke up wondering why,
Hadn’t given them a single try.
Maybe: son of gravity's might.
Boy's head was rising towards sky,
Thread was loosen for a oceanic while,
Then he tightened, brought it to height.
Like wings of fur, the kite flied.
This is how a relationship can glide.
Dream was indicating a theory realized.
2007-02-15 03:25:25 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
This is much better than most poems I've read here.
I still don't get it,
but the thing of art is to get the gist, the feeling, not necessarily getting the point.
Wish I could do that-
I think I still tell more than I show.
Keep developing your writing, please!
2007-02-15 03:34:04 · answer #1 · answered by starryeyed 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I usually like poetry , but I sort of don't get this one much. Sorry
2007-02-15 11:34:41 · answer #2 · answered by Cajun_ Creater 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad for a thirteen year-old kid.
2007-02-15 11:41:52 · answer #3 · answered by romaniascott 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
:)
2007-02-15 11:35:05 · answer #4 · answered by M.C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋