well this is actually the last part..
the rest is not yet complete..
I lie...
Then on the bed of roses fed by tears
day by day till sunshine clears
forlorn takes place to the platonic lover
come what may my fear of fears....
2007-02-14 15:34:01 · 13 answers · asked by J o h n 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
wanting love, desiring in great depth for that which has not been and the torrid aspect your deepest fears will be reality, you are alone, and wish to be otherwise. Finish it I want to know the ending!
2007-02-14 16:01:13 · answer #1 · answered by Sage 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You wrote the last part first?
Either way I think it's hard for anyone to give you an accurate opinion without knowing what emotion you are trying to portray (which may be explained by the rest of it).
2007-02-14 23:43:40 · answer #2 · answered by azhat 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Undertake me to this scene...
Forsake the one whom left you in such dismay
For if I was the one for thee...Thy beginning would be positioned in cupids warm embrace.
Thine essence recaptured in mine tears
Hence not a single one dispersed
In order that mine LOVE would never die
Entwined within my eyes to keep
2007-02-15 02:23:48 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seriously man even though i dont know you in all but your poem is ******* sweet to say the least
2007-02-14 23:39:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good i like it.i would like to read the rest of it once it`s finished.
2007-02-14 23:39:16 · answer #5 · answered by ♥Snowflake♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like it, John.
2007-02-15 03:50:56 · answer #6 · answered by Barbara V 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.
2007-02-14 23:36:58 · answer #7 · answered by karen v 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's nice.. =) hope you post the rest when you finish it..
2007-02-14 23:49:40 · answer #8 · answered by joanneski 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
isn't it like really sad?
2007-02-15 01:53:28 · answer #9 · answered by impossibilityoftruth 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its differint
2007-02-14 23:40:01 · answer #10 · answered by trixie6965@sbcglobal.net 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋