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Question

Who has been the most influential person in my life?
I can’t just specifically talk about one person.
As I stepped into new situations, I have confronted new people, and each of them has thought me a new, unique lesson. However, there are always some people in everybody’s life who are the most influential people.
In my life, those people have been my parents. My father, with his great heart, endeavor, honesty, and tolerant; and my mother, with her kindness, morality, and strength as a feminist have become my pattern.
Even though I haven’t roughly gotten what they tried to teach me, over the years, as things have come up in my life, I remember things they thought me that pertain to what I am going through now, and I try to apply it, and it helps me.
I still think that I have got many things to learn from them, and I try my best to do that.

please need help

Answer 1

Who has been the most influential person in my life? There are more than one. As I stepped into new situations, I have encountered new people, and each one has taught me a new, unique lesson. Most influential of all have been my parents: my father, for his great heart, honesty, and tolerance; and my mother, for her kindness, morality, and strength as a feminist. They have become my pattern.

Even though I haven’t learned everything they tried to teach me, I have tried to apply the values and principles I learned from them, and that has helped me in situations that arose in my life over the years. Even now, my parents remain a guiding influence in my life.

Answer 2

Hopefully, this might help. I changed a few words-

I could not possibly specify only one single person as the most influential person in my life. As I have entered new situations and confronted new people throughout my life, each of these have given me a new and unique lesson. However, for some of us there are individuals who impact our lives in greater ways than we could ever hope.
In my life, those people are my parents. My father - who has lead by example with such characteristics as honesty, tolerance, endeavor, and caring heart. My mother – who has taught me kindness, morals, and strength as a feminist. Though I know I haven’t always taken the time to learn all they have to offer, their advice and strength is a reminder to me during difficult situations I often find myself in. Lessons past continue to remind me of the long way I still must go to truly understand all my parents have to give.

Answer 3

I wouldn't change anything except the word 'tolerant' in relation to your father : 'his honesty and tolerance' is what you need.