February 14th....
Its a cool day,
But it is not cold.
Its a grey day,
Though it is not old.
Its a boring day,
Or so Im told.
Its a sad day,
Without you to hold.
2007-02-14 03:47:05 · 13 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
pretty good buddy!
2007-02-14 03:49:11 · answer #1 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Definitely a 10!
2007-02-14 11:54:57 · answer #2 · answered by CTU 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fairly good, but it's missing something. I think it's the fact that the day is sad, and the person, it would be better if the sun was shining and stuff, but that person was still sad. 7/10
2007-02-14 11:50:25 · answer #3 · answered by Mr.President 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-02-14 11:59:44 · answer #4 · answered by Chistiaŋ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked your other poem ,but this is a very nice one espeically for Valitines Day , Happy Valitines Day too you
2007-02-14 11:53:24 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You wrote a poem bout your nads resting in some grey boxers and you're YEARNING....to hold them?
What a Phuckin' wierd poem dude!!!...U need to just grab your unit if U miss it so....
2007-02-14 11:52:28 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ohhhhhhhhhhh, touching!!!
2007-02-14 11:51:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, not bad at all (I'm not good at serious poetry though)
2007-02-14 11:57:22 · answer #8 · answered by Sunnie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad the last part is touching
2007-02-14 11:50:32 · answer #9 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awe, you want me to hold you?
2007-02-14 11:49:17 · answer #10 · answered by Dove 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 7.25, myself.
2007-02-14 11:49:25 · answer #11 · answered by j;eaojtoig;45jho;54ihu;45hujt54 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋