Help
In my mind i feel so sane,
in my body i feel so much pain.
How can i be real when i live
my life based on a lie,i don't want to continue
but it's so hard even when i try.
Am i a faker? could this really be me?
How can i change it? i want to be free.
Often times i think i'm happy, but deep
within i know it's not true.
I feel alone, and cry all day,
i want to be with somone who cares,
someone who's willing to play.
My life has ended, it funny because
i don't think it has begun,i just want to be
accepted and have some fun.
Hold me, touch me, show me you care,
feel what i feel let me know it's for real.
carry me around and show me to your friends,
that's what i want and hope it never ends.
Kimone march
2007-02-14 01:53:51 · 5 answers · asked by kelly 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
i would like to say something, these poems that i write they are not based on my life, but i know people out there who they affect. these are the typed of poems i write. poems with emotion. and again this is not my life but what other people who i know are going through.
2007-02-14 02:06:48 · update #1
wow that is an awesome poem, you have some talent there ;-)
don't worry good things come to those who wait, if someone is not giving you the attention you deserve or desire than maybe that person is not good enough for you. They do not realize what a gem you are. Before you know it you will find someone better, be true to yourself. It might hurt now but it is better in the long run. You never know he might realize what he lost and come back to find you.................. Everyone feels lonely, it just takes time to feel better
2007-02-14 02:03:46 · answer #1 · answered by life is great 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Love who you are. And change what you don't like about your self. That's what you need to do. You are the only one who can make your self happy! And change whatever you don't like about you. Your here for a reason... You just have to find it. And when you do you will think that all of this was just silly.Good Luck and Happy Valentine's Day to you!
2007-02-14 10:04:06 · answer #2 · answered by pinkbubbles282004 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You can make this into a song, really...
Get a copyright first, though...
And listen to me.When people have problems they have a bad aura and that repels everyone.
Try to leave your problems aside and you will get what you want.
2007-02-14 10:03:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice sentiment
2007-02-14 10:01:35 · answer #4 · answered by **Red** 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
With such beautiful words ..
Its a shame.....you are where you are....
Deserving of a whole lot more ..
and much, much better !!!
2007-02-14 09:59:40 · answer #5 · answered by yahoo 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋