im sitting in my room again on a Friday night
i feel so alone and cold don’t you see I need you so
the music is blasted and its drowning out my thoughts
the lyrics are consuming me and my hope is lost
and every word you’ve ever said still lingers in my head
and as I lay here I know that I’d be better off dead
-chorus- isn’t it beautiful the way shes laying there
isn’t it wonderful they way she slowly dies
isn’t it just beautiful the death of of an angel
you told her that you loved her
then left her all alone
isn’t it beautiful when an angel dies
and isn’t it just so beautiful when an angel slowly dies
2007-02-13 17:49:24 · 8 answers · asked by cheaa boy 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
im hiding in the dark wishing you were here
im bleeding on the floor destroying all my fear
and im getting colder now my heartbeats slowing down
the rhythm of the music begins to calm be down
-chorus
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the pain is slow but God it kills
my tender heart begins to bleed and im sure im done for now
the shock has left me numb and I tremble to the floor
the wind blows in the window and then my life finally ends
my last breath is carried in the wind my voice never to be heard again
-chorus
look at what you’ve done
your lies they killed an angel
are you proud of what you’ve done
are you proud of what you’ve done
are you proud you killed and angel
yeah you killed an angel
2007-02-13 17:50:18 · update #1
to be honest its horrible. i can't belive i wasted time to read it
2007-02-13 17:53:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You should learn English first... you know, the small things like the difference between "blasted" and "blasting" or "laying" and "lying." I assume you know that you repeat the line with just one "and" in between, kinda like "The sky is blue and the sky is very blue." Stupid. To wit:
"isn’t it beautiful when an angel dies
and isn’t it just so beautiful when an angel slowly dies"
So, the big dog dumped you, huh? Tough. Ony 2.9 bil. guys around to choose from. I'd be in a bar with three chicks on my lap by now.
2007-02-14 02:04:53 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it`s too repetitive. The lyrics aren`t short, and the same idea appears (in similar ways of expressing it). I would shorten the song, or add more dimensions to lyrics.
Personally, I didn`t like it. It seems too needy. But it`s your song (although you asked if we liked it)
2007-02-14 02:02:31 · answer #3 · answered by Alec113 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's pretty good it's just hard to figure out the rythem for it the way you typed it out. but other then that great job and much luck with it.
2007-02-14 01:58:00 · answer #4 · answered by Leigh 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Good luck with your song writing. I have great respect for songwriters. Keep at it.
2007-02-14 01:54:12 · answer #5 · answered by Kronsteen of Spectre 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
WOW!!! cool this song is exellent,can i sing it when i become a singer and what do you think of this stage name princess additude
2007-02-14 02:55:52 · answer #6 · answered by Tiffanyyyy:) 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
pretty impressive... not bad at all..!
2007-02-14 02:07:24 · answer #7 · answered by fizadora 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow!
2007-02-14 01:53:24 · answer #8 · answered by miss gee 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋